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Untouchable Hearts

Lustful hearts are too hot to hold And depressed ones are just too cold, These dear old hearts can't be touched Even if they find someone they love too much, It'll never be propper... it'll never be right Even if they find pleasure in physical delight, No but these hearts must change if they hope to be held and find the illusion that they could be held... dispelled.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/30/2012 9:08:00 AM
Great poem!
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Date: 1/30/2012 6:02:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved featured poetry this week Literrius. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/6/2011 5:11:00 PM
Wow Nice one. Now you got us hooked you have to deliver more of the goods. So don't keep us waiting. MORE!!!
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Date: 12/6/2011 4:04:00 PM
Liked this , welcome to soup Declan .
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