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When did the cost of living, Become so expensive? Working two fulltime jobs, minimum wage, Still cant afford to eat. The lampshade, Needs to be dusted again, And so does the vase, That my grandmother bought. She covers up, The bruises, With makeup in the mirror. Will this be convincing enough, For them? When will she realize, That she is better than this? When will she realize her skin, Was meant to be caressed? Not bruised. When will she put a stop, To his abuse? His words do more damage, Than her razor blades ever could.

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Date: 7/21/2016 3:52:00 PM
Halie, well penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. *SKAT*
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Date: 11/16/2015 10:55:00 PM
Hi Halie, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 11/15/2015 12:17:00 PM
Hi Halie, this is such an excellent piece that makes me look forward to reading more of your work! Welcome to PoetrySoup and best wishes as you continue to churn out wonderful poetic pieces! Warmest regards and a score of 7! Pandita
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Date: 11/12/2015 3:00:00 PM
Hailed, , Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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