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Aye! The joyous ocean creatures awoke And the coward fire-breathers begun its dance The sea of no end now draws a line And the mighty swimmers of silence called aloud But beneath the Captain's cabin The brave ol' carrier now peeps And so gone with the rudder, the hull and keel The lone old drifter crashed its sails But calling from afar are dreams souring high Wicked vultures pulling them savagely down And I behind the pen...uttered not a word

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Date: 9/21/2019 9:10:00 PM
Sarah, so many interpretations to write. Enjoyed, you've made me think.
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Date: 1/26/2016 2:34:00 PM
well as I peek behind that pen....inspiration becomes my friend....thoughts so profound and rare....imagery that astounds with care....from sarah's pen, that is all that I see....and I am glad I had this opportunity for you to inspire me....;)
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Sarah Jabri
Date: 2/3/2016 1:59:00 AM
Thanks eric :) hope you're doing good
Date: 1/23/2016 11:09:00 PM
SARAH, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Always with LUV **SKAT**
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Sarah Jabri
Date: 1/24/2016 6:23:00 AM
oh thank you Skat :) always nice to have you around :)

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