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When I walk towards the door, will you miss me? The 60 seconds spent walking from the embrace of your smile and eyes may seem a minute to a passerby, but to me it seems a year. I think of how your eyes placed my eyes into a state that only my heart can explain. As I grab the handle to pull open the door, will you stop me? After releasing the handle, I turn around to place my eyes upon your eyes once more. The kiss we then share is filled with more emotions than one can fathom, making it the most unforgettable kiss I'll ever have, in my life.. One day.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/4/2016 11:07:00 PM

SHAN, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Skat A

Date: 1/1/2016 11:08:00 PM

Shan, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT