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I said look Lord is my salvation I can feel my heart Pulsating Aching my head Procrastinating changes I hope I change this If u can handle me at my worst You deserve me at my best Life is a test Study a human Study every movement Unchain your mind No pain is soothing I'm looking eyes blurry My mind feels stupid I lose it Starry eyes and stooges Talking lies on the pulpit I can prove it I'm lonely I'm the moon man Eskimo life in this cold world My body shivers like seizures All I ever wanted is the realm Like julius ceasar My body numb Razor blades cut through my wrist I bleed out All the pain and unrest Emotions that trouble my chest If there was a beginning This the first If God is omega This is the end

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 10/7/2014 5:00:00 PM
Khaya, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry:) Here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 10/7/2014 11:12:00 AM
Khaya, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 10/5/2014 12:06:00 AM
A very deep powerful piece - well done! Welcome to PoetrySoup and happy writings! Pandita
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Date: 10/4/2014 1:39:00 PM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Khaya- I choose your first very well written poem - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/2/2014 7:24:00 PM
Nice poem. Looking forward to seeing your future works.
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Khaya Ndabankulu
Date: 10/2/2014 9:45:00 PM
Thank you. Much Appreciated.

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