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He whispered in my ear So softly His words sang a melody in my body That made me quiver It felt good His hands gently massaging My brown skin Sending tickling sensations Up and down my spine Feeling soft blows On my frontal lobe He kisses me My love begins to rain I bleed impatient desire He quickly fills me And applies pressure My heart beats faster And faster The pounding of his heart Equivalent to his pounding thrusts I feel the excitement building The adrenaline rushing He lets out a signal of release I let out a sigh of relief We stare deeply into each others eyes And in a polite manner I ask him, “What’s your name?”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 6/13/2014 10:45:00 AM
Wonderful! Erotica with a message! I'm hooked.
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Date: 6/12/2014 6:25:00 PM
Joey, And Welcome To Her PoeSoup ~ Dig The Verse You Go Girl! KLove *
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Latosha Mitchell
Date: 6/13/2014 10:15:00 AM
Thanks!
Date: 6/11/2014 11:52:00 PM
This piece sizzles with passion Latosha, you paint a very vivid picture for the imagination of your readers. Very well done, Oh by the way the names Carl, lol Blessings, Carl
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Latosha Mitchell
Date: 6/13/2014 10:15:00 AM
Thank you Carl! Appreciate it.
Date: 6/10/2014 3:17:00 PM
A very moving work, no pun intended. Nice write Lotosha!
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Latosha Mitchell
Date: 6/13/2014 10:14:00 AM
Thank you!
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Jeremy Street
Date: 6/12/2014 6:29:00 PM
Hey lame it's not Lotosha ?
Date: 6/9/2014 1:24:00 PM
:) ...This is a lovely lovely write. ..I see that you're no beginner in writing. ..A gifted pen you hold my friend. I'll be waiting for more.
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Latosha Mitchell
Date: 6/9/2014 1:29:00 PM
Certainly not! Thanks! I will keep you updated.
Date: 6/9/2014 1:00:00 PM
- A summer romance :) ..... a sweet & lovely poem, Latosha! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Latosha Mitchell
Date: 6/9/2014 1:27:00 PM
Thanks Anne-Lise!

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