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Below is the poem entitled Untitled which was written by poet Jay Loveless. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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I dream of when you would touch me
And the light shinning in your eyes 
Of every moment together
And the nights we both wanted to die

You and I
Oh you and I
You were my life
Tho you made me cry
And I was the one who got away
You couldn't forgive yourself
For pushing me away 

Everytime we talk still
My heart gives a rapid beat
I've forgiven all of the past
Through the time that we didn't speak 
And I was your heart and savior
I led you to the light 
Then darkness was back upon us
I refused to fight 

You and I 
Oh you and I 
I was your light
Tho I made you cry 
And I was the one who ran away
Though my heart always said your name

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  1. Date: 2/14/2013 8:26:00 PM
    Jay, , Stopping by with sincere thanks for your kind comments. It is appreciated more than words or can say... Wishing you the best Valentine's Day YET! Always & Forever :-) LINDA

  1. Date: 1/31/2013 3:30:00 PM
    This is a great song - I'm sure you could sing it true - J.A.B. %

    Bordner Avatar Justin Bordner
    Date: 2/4/2013 1:08:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    ' I was your heart and savior...' this is a great metaphor modification of an old saying, and better than the original!
    Loveless Avatar Jay Loveless
    Date: 1/31/2013 11:55:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Id have to get back into singing first