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Ten years after the bombing of our land Still the heart feels so broken Tears still fall as loud and painful as the day it happened so long ago We must never forget what happened on September the Eleventh The world will never be free of bullies cowards and underminders The fight for freedom never ends it is a constant struggle my friend We must never give up the fight for independence everywhere sir

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Skat A

Date: 5/19/2016 1:52:00 PM

David, creative and well done. Thank you for sharing. **SKAT**

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 4/3/2013 4:16:00 PM

Very moving poem: I was in Australia when this was reported and I thought I was watching a movie.....that any mind could imagine such evil as these terrorists inflicted is beyond human. Thanks for your comments today on my poems. Welcome from me. Suz

Nathan D.

Date: 5/3/2012 9:39:00 AM

excellent

J. Dover

Date: 5/2/2012 3:04:00 PM

I was in elementary school when 9-11 hapenned, but i still remember that day. we were so scared, and so horrified, as a child i wondered who would do such a thing... but our counrty is the promised land, we are strong and we can get through anything the world throws at us as long as we stand united, great reminder david, thank you, Love, J.