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old dreams new temptations rage for a different life tangle 'round one another pulling against my shackles wound up but not set free poked prodded kept awake by thornthoughts fully tensed on tiptoe eases the weight on my shoulders but makes my legs shake your eyes heatflash my direction the hidden statements stumblefluster me make me stormdark and dangerous don't you see the pit we're playing by?

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Date: 3/23/2010 11:43:00 AM
thank you both! i love playing with words, but my writing has always mostly been for myself. sort of a therapy thing. lol but i like this site; a friend recommended it to me. she's very sure i need to share my work. :)
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Date: 3/23/2010 11:34:00 AM
Shelli~ I really like your use of language in this piece very vivid! Laura :)
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Date: 3/23/2010 11:19:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your poetry with us today Shelli. I enjoyed reading this piece. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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