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been living in this world for 15 years nothing been coming out my eyes but tears been more of them bad days than them good i'd always wish i could live the life i see on television so i wouldn't have to make big decisions live with no sense of being scared and just have a dream to be shared no one to say i'm a failure and have my life capture in a box so small i can't even crawl i try to be big and fall in place but i can't stop the chase all those hurtful words fly in and out like birds but i can't ever stop it it's something that will never quit.

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Date: 2/24/2010 11:12:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry today Nancy. Please keep writing and sharing with us here at PoetrySoup. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/23/2010 7:31:00 PM
This is a very honest poem. You have a great voice in it. It's sincere and believable. Great use of colloquial language. I would suggest changing "fa" to "for" in the first sentence. Nice job! -Mike
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