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As the life slowly drains From what's left of me I think of what has happened, What hasn't, And what's left to be. I feel that a point has been reached A deeper understanding Of who i am And of what life wants from me. Time is passing quicker Still so much to be done I can feel myself getting weaker There is just no love. No love for life, No love for anything, So i now wonder what's the point really? Why am i even here? To the point where i don't even exist Almost nothing to be left Everything ends with and understanding And a purposeful death..

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/25/2009 3:37:00 PM
I enjoy your poems Christina, keep writing, James
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Date: 5/18/2009 1:37:00 PM
There is always tomorrow. The darkness goes away and the sun shines in. I like the flow of the words and the essence of the poem. Great job and keep writing! ~Joseph
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Date: 5/18/2009 11:29:00 AM
your a great writer tina, keep on going
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Date: 5/10/2009 11:44:00 AM
I really enjoyed reading your poetry. Keep on posting. Ernilando
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Date: 5/9/2009 5:46:00 PM
Love this truthful piece... come talk with me if it gets too bad and if i have time i will get back. Enjoy your day and check out my new poem, what the elders might say.
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Date: 5/8/2009 3:13:00 PM
this was truly heart-breakingly beautiful. all life is worth living thought, for there is always something. no giving up! :)! my heart goes out to you, and i really enjoyed this poem! <3 madison
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