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Where the road I look- is walked by several
people...  there are footprints leading inwards
that has me inviting to its path.
Though my foot is attempted to walk its soil,
I know that there's no good this way.
I find an inner strength to walk a separate way.

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  1. Date: 6/9/2009 4:22:00 PM
    And in that inner strength the journey begins to finding your way. I really like the last line. I think coming up with a title--perhaps something with the word journey in it--would make this piece even stronger. Thank you for sharing this thought provoking poem with us and for your kind words on my cinquain. Best wishes with your writing. Karen

  1. Date: 1/4/2009 8:25:00 PM
    great write and i love the ending. well penned and warm regards