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Where the road I look- is walked by several people... there are footprints leading inwards that has me inviting to its path. Though my foot is attempted to walk its soil, I know that there's no good this way. I find an inner strength to walk a separate way.

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Date: 6/9/2009 4:22:00 PM
And in that inner strength the journey begins to finding your way. I really like the last line. I think coming up with a title--perhaps something with the word journey in it--would make this piece even stronger. Thank you for sharing this thought provoking poem with us and for your kind words on my cinquain. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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Date: 1/4/2009 8:25:00 PM
great write and i love the ending. well penned and warm regards
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