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Pain knocks on my heart again I don't want to be it's friend I run to try to lock it out But some how It found a way in through my soul.... *Any title suggestions?*

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Robin L. Gass

Date: 12/14/2008 10:26:00 PM

Your poems are so heartfelt. It isn't easy trying to hide from the pain but hopefully writing about it helps it "run" out of your soul. As to the title, I see it as "Unwelcomed" or something to that effect. Good luck Thank you for your thoughtful comments. Love Robin

S Schantz

Date: 12/14/2008 7:08:00 PM

I truly enjoyed reading your work, myself being new to poetry, I have realized how truly alike we all are in our feelings. You have a heartfelt trueness about expressing them. I see you have also made an impact on many others by the comments you have received. Thank you. Also, thank you for your comments, I was glad to see my Holiday carol gave you a laugh, im sure your life holds many more. God bless, sjs