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Wondering what im here for Life's so ominous So random and tough I scribe my lines Thinking im meant to be a writer I've lost everything Used to have a great job But all had to be lost So I could build something better I have to do it myself Determination Hard work Honour Success Gratify Satisfy For the first time in my life I strive to accomplish A goal I've set I've never done that before Its time Put myself on the line Failure Or a celebrated moment In the end ill know Its one Or the other A curtain Slowly Rising Beginning The Show

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Date: 10/5/2015 3:33:00 AM
- A friendly welcome with your first great poem here on Poetry Soup - Hope there will be many ... many more in the future :) - I wish you good luck, Adam :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/2/2015 11:28:00 AM
Adam, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 10/2/2015 9:56:00 AM
Adam WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 10/2/2015 8:26:00 AM
Adam, I really enjoyed reading your poem, it was full of pride and determination and deep emotion, well done, a 7 rating from me, and I want to welcome you to Poetry Soup, enjoy the journey, I am from Canada also, Ottawa, Ontario ~~
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