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Until You Left

You really think you have it all When you're in love He brings you roses He buys you candy He adores you... Until one day it all changes He doesn't feel the same And he leaves you, your heart torn out Bleeding to death Laying cold in the ditch It's possible to recover... But it's not easy What you did to me was wrong I hate you for that But I also have to thank you For making me the most important woman in the world Although it was only for a short time I will always love you, Even though you never did me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 4/16/2015 3:02:00 PM
Logan - I hope this didn't really happen to you! But it's a moving poem anyway, and I like it. Welcome to poetry soup. (I guess I can say that - I'm new too.) And congratulations on best new poet!
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Logan Holliday
Date: 4/18/2015 10:38:00 PM
Thank you! And unfortunately it did happen.. But life goes on! :)

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