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Unsure Economy

Dancing butterflies, await Optimism holds, nothing is secure A nation pauses.

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Nathaniel Köhp

Date: 2/24/2009 2:58:00 PM

I love the butterfly metaphor. The frail wings, the creature you can crush in your hands. Definitely a good symbol for everything which is going on in economy and even politics. Well done! Nathaniel

Gregory Golden

Date: 2/13/2009 9:40:00 PM

The butterfly flies through this ring of fire. We all stand at the water's edge. A superbly written Haiku Poem. It sings with resonance. Keep sharing.

Date: 2/12/2009 12:27:00 PM

Much to think about in your words. This is a timely poem. Yes, we need some optimism to hang onto. Nice job! Thank you for your kind words regarding my haiku. Keep on writing! Karen

Arany P.

Date: 2/12/2009 3:27:00 AM

in a pause i m with this haiku... lovely creative! ~ Arany

Laurie Ginn

Date: 2/11/2009 7:58:00 PM

Oy does it ever speak volumes, Nice job kiddo. Laurie

Raul Moreno

Date: 2/11/2009 4:28:00 PM

So much said in a short form. Great job...Raul

Sharon Winter

Date: 2/11/2009 2:14:00 PM

Wow. Speaking volumes here in this extremely well written haiku. Nice work! love, Shar