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Unsung Hero - the Soldier

Unsung Hero – The Soldier Warily he stood at the corner, Wondering which way to turn. A weary smile on his faded brow, As he held out an old worn-out hat hoping for handouts, A few miserly pennies or perhaps, even a piece of bread. This once proud soldier, Now reduced to being a petty beggar, Was a remnant of a cruel war; Where he once stood side-by-side with his comrades And helplessly watched them fall one-by-one. Cruel memories haunted his saddened heart, As he each day he desperately tried to survive, Wondering if it would have been better If he too on the bloody battlefield had died - But there was no real answer. Maybe it was good that he had done his duty Fighting for those who couldn’t. But now he was forgotten and forlorn, With no honor, no glory, He was just a nobody. With warm tears streaming down his cold cheeks, Even now he thought of his fallen comrades, Questioning if they were really in a better place - What if? Why? His thoughts about his tortured past Continued to cling to him, Like the tattered coat He wore during the day, And used for a pillow at night. In his mind, he was still on the battlefield, Only this time he battled invisible foes - A mind growing feeble, homelessness, Hunger, loneliness, and most of all – Not having anyone to love him. 9-16-2014

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Date: 4/20/2016 11:41:00 PM
Excellent. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
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Kika Ayala
Date: 4/23/2016 10:07:00 AM
Thank you so much my poet friend for your kind words! Hugs. Kika
Date: 3/14/2016 12:17:00 PM
kika ayala, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Kika Ayala
Date: 4/19/2016 11:23:00 PM
Hi Linda, thanks very much for your visit and kind words about my poetry. Best wishes to you and have a nice day! Kika
Date: 3/13/2016 4:04:00 PM
Wonderful composition. Great imagery!
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Kika Ayala
Date: 4/19/2016 11:22:00 PM
Hi Valerie, what a wonderful compliment you have left for me! You made my day! Thank you so much! I look forward to reading your works! Kika
Date: 1/8/2016 7:42:00 PM
Kika, CONGRATS on your Awesome win.... SKAT
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Kika Ayala
Date: 1/17/2016 6:24:00 PM
Hi Skat, this means a lot to me! Thank you so much! Kika
Date: 1/8/2016 5:07:00 AM
So sad Kika, full of emotion. Congrats on your win! From Jean
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Kika Ayala
Date: 1/17/2016 6:23:00 PM
Thank you Jean, I appreciate your kind congratulations. Kika
Date: 12/30/2015 12:25:00 PM
A deep write, kika... Happy New Years... Always ~LINDA~
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Kika Ayala
Date: 1/6/2016 8:06:00 PM
Thank you my friend, and happy New year to you too, Lovely Linda! Kika
Date: 11/2/2015 1:51:00 PM
thanks for all the great poems you have written they really inspired me
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Date: 11/14/2015 5:48:00 PM
Awww! Dear Dylan, what a wonderful compliment you have left for me! You made my day! Thank you so much! I look forward to reading your works! Kika
Date: 9/1/2015 1:33:00 AM
Congrats on your superb winning write Kika!
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Kika Ayala
Date: 9/11/2015 9:58:00 PM
Hi Dr. Sharma, thanks very much for your visit and kind words about my poetry. Best wishes to you and have a nice day! Kika
Date: 8/30/2015 5:50:00 PM
Hi Kika, once again congratulations on another well-deserved win for this piece! Well done, my friend! Pandita
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Kika Ayala
Date: 8/31/2015 9:40:00 PM
I am so happy with this win. This piece is so special to me and I am glad that my fellow poets appreciate it! Thanks, Pandita! Kika
Date: 7/27/2015 2:28:00 PM
Kika, I enjoyed reading your poem today. I hope you are well. Forever ~SKAT~
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Kika Ayala
Date: 8/6/2015 7:36:00 PM
Thank you dear friend for your kind words and for reading my poem. I have been ill. But today is a good day:-) Stay well! Kika
Date: 7/15/2015 1:19:00 PM
A heart felt sad poem that describes the pain of war and politics that discard the soldier that gave their all for freedom and country. All soldiers even the ones on the other side are someone’s father, mother, brother, son, sister or loved one and we sometimes loose sights of that after the fighting is done and we cut them loose. Emile. #7
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Kika Ayala
Date: 7/19/2015 1:43:00 PM
Dear Emile, your words are so true! It's so sad and shameful how our real heroes are treated! Thank you so much for your lovely comments and high rating. Have a nice Sunday! Kika
Date: 6/25/2015 10:00:00 AM
Excellent write, Kika, a great tribute to our unsung heroes! So many still having nightmares of the past. Hugs Eve
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Date: 6/27/2015 9:51:00 AM
Hi Eve, thanks very much for your visit and kind words about my poetry. Best wishes ti you and have a nice day! Kika
Date: 1/3/2015 10:15:00 AM
VERY Touching! A tremendous write... My son is in the army infantry... My worries for him... are written here... even before his first deployment... He's finishing basic training now... This will be a favorite... It expresses so much.
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Kika Ayala
Date: 1/3/2015 10:37:00 PM
Hi Carol, I thank you so much for commenting and complimenting this piece. I know how you feel as I have a grandson who is in the Army and we worry about him all the time. I will keep your son in my prayers that God will protect him from all harm. Have a blessed 2015, my friend! Kika.
Date: 1/2/2015 3:16:00 PM
Hi Kika, I am just circling back with my congratulations on a great top-of-the-class win! Bravo! Pandita.
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Kika Ayala
Date: 1/2/2015 3:23:00 PM
Hi Pandita, thanks again for visiting and commenting on this piece! Best wishes always, my friend! Kika.
Date: 1/2/2015 3:49:00 AM
Nice one, congrats Kika...huggs
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Kika Ayala
Date: 1/2/2015 3:13:00 PM
Hi Kayode, thank you for visiting me and complimenting my work! With much appreciation, Kika.
Date: 1/1/2015 6:52:00 PM
Kika,, thank you for supporting one of the many, contest I ran last year. Dropping by to say hi in hopes you are enjoying the first day of 2015 :) :) Stop by my latest blog "You Call This Poetry" if you'd like. Enjoy the win, I sure did. Love Linda
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Kika Ayala
Date: 1/2/2015 3:10:00 PM
Hi Linda, I am so happy to win a placement in your contest! Thank you so much! Best wishes to you for a great year! Kika.
Date: 1/1/2015 6:47:00 PM
such a powerful and touching write - many congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xx
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Kika Ayala
Date: 1/2/2015 3:09:00 PM
Hi Jan, thanks for complimenting my work. I really appreciate it! Best wishes to you! Kika.
Date: 12/20/2014 11:12:00 AM
- Hey, Kika - a touching, but lovely poem! - .... a Christmas smile to you :) - I wish you and your family a peaceful and lovely Christmas - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Kika Ayala
Date: 12/24/2014 10:06:00 AM
Thank you so much, Anne-Lise, for your kind compliments which I appreciate! I pray that you will have a wonderful Christmas and a very fulfilling 2015! All the very best to you, Kika.
Date: 10/9/2014 3:00:00 AM
A TOUCHING ONE.WONDERFULLY PENNED.
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Kika Ayala
Date: 10/9/2014 3:28:00 PM
Hi Rohini, thank you so much for complimenting my work. Warm regards. Kika
Date: 10/1/2014 2:43:00 PM
War in the mind is deadlier than physical battle. When life has no essence, death is essential!
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Kika Ayala
Date: 10/9/2014 3:28:00 PM
Thank you so much for your kind comments which I appreciate! Kika
Date: 9/29/2014 4:35:00 PM
touching deeply beautifully penned kika
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Kika Ayala
Date: 10/9/2014 3:27:00 PM
Liam, I am glad you liked this one! Thank you so much! Kika
Date: 9/23/2014 11:45:00 PM
Powerful and moving imagery, indeed.
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Kika Ayala
Date: 9/26/2014 1:02:00 PM
ML, thank you for stopping by and for leaving these nice compliments about my work! Best wishes, Kika
Date: 9/16/2014 4:21:00 PM
Thank you for sharing "Unsung Hero". It hits hard because literally our veterans have not been cared for. Almost if not a, Love The War, Not The Warrior!
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Kika Ayala
Date: 9/20/2014 4:31:00 PM
Hi Judy, I am so happy that you enjoyed this piece. You are so right that we have neglected our veterans. I have a grandson in the military and I pray that he will not be treated this way.Thank you so much for your kind visit and comments. Kika
Date: 9/16/2014 2:49:00 PM
Excellent write, Kika! What a great tribute to our unsung heroes! Bravo! Pandita
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Kika Ayala
Date: 9/20/2014 4:28:00 PM
I am glad you liked this one! Thank you so much! Kika

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