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Unsent Letter

I like your long wavy hair Brown it is better than fair I like your pretty eyes in green They’re the purest I have ever seen Or maybe they are hazel? Beautiful but still as sharp as a razor! (And don’t worry about being short Because men like girls of the sort!) Your glasses are nice and perfectly fit It is a pleasure to me that we both met Two colleagues among friends who are many Trying to gain knowledge but not getting any! Your smile makes my eyes hurt That’s the truth, I don’t mean to flirt Please excuse me for writing about your beauty But somebody has to, it’s an urgent duty! Because this kind of perfection must….. Pass to the next generation Who wouldn’t have this perfection….. In even imagination They will never believe that…. A girl like you had ever been Because like your beauty they will… Never have seen Your charm, miss, is beyond any measure So everybody should know to have the pleasure (If this poem is good, it’s because of you Because I made no effort, I just described you!) I’m writing this poem about you and…. Asking for permission And hope not to be misunderstood…. And above suspicion Because this poem wasn’t meant…. To be a work of heart It was only meant to be a work of art I can’t honestly say if this poem ….. Depicts the real glamor of you But only God can do that…. I just tried to!

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/24/2015 6:00:00 PM

Mohamed. Congratulations on your XOOL flirting poetic win. Love LINDA"

Mohamed Adel
Date: 7/25/2015 3:28:00 AM

Thank you,Linda, so much for your constant support :)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/22/2015 2:36:00 AM

Superb write Mohamed, congrats on ur much deserved win!

Mohamed Adel
Date: 7/22/2015 5:37:00 AM

Thank you,Dr.Upma, so much :)

Lee Carter

Date: 7/21/2015 7:48:00 AM

Love your letter... Great write congrats on your win!

Mohamed Adel
Date: 7/21/2015 12:49:00 PM

Thank you,Lee, so much and very happy you liked it :)

Sizwe Hlabisa

Date: 7/21/2015 2:05:00 AM

Congrats man, a letter that can seduce. I'll let you write my letters from now on

Mohamed Adel
Date: 7/21/2015 12:47:00 PM

hhhhhhhhh Thank you,Sizwe, so much and so glad you liked it :)

Viv Wigley

Date: 7/20/2015 8:36:00 PM

Don't waste that letter, Mohamed, go buy a stamp. great flirt, congratulations. Regards, Viv

Mohamed Adel
Date: 7/21/2015 12:45:00 PM

Thank you,Viv, so much for stopping by and I'll try to do my best :)

Thabang Ngoma

Date: 7/20/2015 3:26:00 PM

Hi Mohamed...I enjoyed every word, every line of this winning letter / poem "7"...you're an amazing 'heartist'! I'm flirted...(:heers, Tbang

Mohamed Adel
Date: 7/20/2015 4:31:00 PM

Thank you,Thabang, so much and very glad you liked it :)

Skat A

Date: 7/20/2015 2:32:00 PM

Once again, it's nice to see this one a winning list. Mohamed, congratulations on your flirtatious win. SKAT LOVE

Mohamed Adel
Date: 7/20/2015 4:29:00 PM

Thank you,Skat, so much for the constant support :)

Jan Allison

Date: 7/20/2015 2:06:00 PM

oh I hope you send the poem to her one day - great write for the contest - many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx

Mohamed Adel
Date: 7/20/2015 4:28:00 PM

Thank you,Jan, so much and i hope so :)

Eve Roper

Date: 7/20/2015 2:01:00 PM

Mohamed, congratulations you on your win a 7 . Hugs Eve

Mohamed Adel
Date: 7/20/2015 4:27:00 PM

Thank you,Eve, so much :)

Casarah Nance

Date: 7/20/2015 1:47:00 PM

Sweet write, nicely done :)

Mohamed Adel
Date: 7/20/2015 4:26:00 PM

Thank you,Casarah, so much :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/5/2015 3:21:00 AM

Mohamed, congratulations. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Mohamed Adel
Date: 7/5/2015 5:01:00 PM

Thank you,Linda, so much for your most kind words and support :)

Skat A

Date: 7/4/2015 7:48:00 PM

Mohamed :) CONGRATULATIONS!!! Thank you for supporting my contest. LOVE SKAT :)

Mohamed Adel
Date: 7/4/2015 11:44:00 PM

Thank you, Skat, so much and all the pleasure is mine :)

Jerry T Curtis

Date: 7/3/2015 5:46:00 PM

Beautifully written Mohamed, There is no reason to resist what comes from the heart.I have to agree with Arthur

Mohamed Adel
Date: 7/3/2015 7:11:00 PM

Thank you, Jerry, so much for commenting, yeah i also think so but it's complicated, but I'm still giving it thought and i hope i figure it out

Arthur Vaso

Date: 6/28/2015 7:11:00 PM

If I where you Mohamed, I would send that letter! This letter could capture the heart of any women you sent it too!!!

Mohamed Adel
Date: 6/28/2015 7:41:00 PM

Thank you, Arthur, so much for your most kind words, i really appreciate your opinion ,and i have been giving it thought and i hope i send it someday :)