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Unseen Wind as it moves Only rustling, swaying Dancing of leaf and limb reveal Presence

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/21/2012 12:55:00 PM
Nicely written, Sara. In Washington the wind is much bigger and it is indoors.
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Date: 5/17/2012 11:20:00 AM
Very nice, I find myself swaying.
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Date: 5/17/2012 6:32:00 AM
Sara very cool..David
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Date: 5/16/2012 9:25:00 PM
I love Cinquains! They always invoke powerful emotion through verbal prowess, and you have prowess. Shall I say, you have presence. Many forces move unseen, some that don't seek the revelry are those most worth seeking.
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Date: 5/16/2012 7:52:00 PM
I love it...I love it...i love it!!! Love the imagery here.
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