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Unsealed With a Kiss

As my volcano fills, I hemorrhage guilt. 4/30/12

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/18/2012 11:24:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Metaphoric Time" contest Susan. Love, Carol

Joseph May

Date: 6/18/2012 8:26:00 AM

congrats on your win Susan

Jonas L. Rozario

Date: 6/17/2012 11:57:00 PM

Wow love this Susan...congrats on your win.

Joann Grisetti

Date: 6/17/2012 7:30:00 PM

Congratulations. You have said so much with your two lines.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/17/2012 4:14:00 PM

wow..I forgot this was even yours.. it's xool to forget things... at first i was like what... such a tiny poem... but, it blew my mind .. you are awesome.. congrats with your wonderful win... and I don't know why it stole 2nd place .. he he he..really... your two lines, topped many long poems.. you are awesome Susan.. xox~pd

Elliott Bowe The Drunken Poet

Date: 5/17/2012 8:43:00 AM

I AM AWESTRUCK.WOW, GREAT WRITE.

Elliott Bowe The Drunken Poet

Date: 5/17/2012 8:42:00 AM

I am AWESTRUCK.WOW, GREAT WRITE.

Cindy Lu

Date: 5/8/2012 9:31:00 AM

very deeply written in this short form. Cindy

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/2/2012 8:00:00 PM

Susan, awe.. it only takes a set...to pack a punch... death at times comes with it's own seal.. explosive, and a wait one should not wait for.. love it.... .. have yourself a very wonderful day ;-) LINDA