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Unsaid Pink Wishes

I still miss The fragrance of dream in your kiss I wanted to express what pulsated inside the gate But I thought the time was to come yet The wishes remained unsaid I still miss the chocolate bliss in your bird’s nest I did contemplate how to reach the higher branches Every time I tried Clouds would gather from various skies I hesitated Sophisticated using simile and metaphor The desire remained unsaid as before I could see How sometimes you would set free your handsome geese towards my waters For reciprocity Still From thoughts that live in wood and hills Some delicate tendrils obstructed that I wanted to say Keeping it unsaid Then one day No smoke no fog no cloud Sky in loud blue I was resolved to be with you and say Those words that waited in the wings of butterfly that generated dreams in my eyes that kindled orange flames inside that invited hundred stimuli But you had left So those dreams remained unsaid In the cleft of dialectics of thought Or the mind caught in a whirlpool to befool my conscious mind Tempest in my head Since then almost every day I regret Why I left it unsaid When the flower was torn the sentence could not be completed the evenings were robbed of their breeze dreams made their decision to keep asleep I couldn't help thinking of what was left unsaid I have still been thinking Of the bunch of tube rose I brought back not given. Replies not listened Reason confined to dark prison With the dissolving years Many a grief Many a bitter leaf Many a thorn have got erased But the words unsaid keeps me wearing out Night and day In light or shade They keep coming back Inside my head Those words unsaid Unshareable Unbearable Making me vulnerable To my biggest regret For the words unsaid September 22, 2017 For the Contest Form U - U Pick The Form Sponsored by: Broken Wings

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Date: 9/28/2017 1:00:00 PM
Oh..Probir- there is too much pain here. Heartbreak, a loss of a love one does hurt.I am pleased that you won. Have a nice day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/29/2017 3:04:00 PM
Your welcome.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 9/29/2017 5:36:00 AM
Thank you, Darlene ..,
Date: 9/24/2017 10:10:00 AM
I truly enjoyed this sad yet beautiful poem, Probir. Procrastination, due to various reasons, results in a heartbreaking loss which time finds hard to heal. Congratulations on your fine win. Regards // paul
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Date: 9/24/2017 1:01:00 PM
Thank you so much, Paul ... Regards ... probir ...
Date: 9/24/2017 12:57:00 AM
Congratulations.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 9/24/2017 1:02:00 PM
Thanks ...
Date: 9/23/2017 2:03:00 PM
Congratulations for your win Probir :)
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Probir Gupta
Date: 9/23/2017 10:05:00 PM
Thanks, Heidi ...
Date: 9/23/2017 1:08:00 PM
Congrats on your win Probir
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Probir Gupta
Date: 9/23/2017 10:05:00 PM
Thanks, Joseph ..
Date: 9/23/2017 9:20:00 AM
Probir, congratulations on your win in my contest, I can tell you worked very hard on your poem and I appreciate that, well done!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 9/23/2017 10:03:00 PM
Thank you so much ... Not exactly ... Coz the theme is very familiar ... I did go into a sort of meditation for say half an hour for collecting the images ... Much more hard was SO's Flamenco ...
Date: 9/23/2017 7:26:00 AM
A superb linguistic cloth of poetic tapestry, Probir. This beautiful poem moves w/swan grace thru the pond of tranquility. Just a beautifully written poem of such emotional depth and sensitive reflection. Great poetry as always from your silver pen and golden mind. Love and more love always.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 9/23/2017 9:59:00 PM
Thank you, Freddie ...
Date: 9/22/2017 11:43:00 AM
A sad but lovely tribute to love and missed opportunity--well written as always--best wishes for a TOP win!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 9/23/2017 6:28:00 AM
Thank you, Vijay ...
Date: 9/22/2017 10:28:00 AM
"Words waiting on the wings of butterflies"..very nice line and a great write ...best wishes
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Probir Gupta
Date: 9/23/2017 6:32:00 AM
Thank you ...

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