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Unrequited Valentine Passion

A love potion meant for her high school beau She mistakenly spilled in my Latte to-go With my passions on fire When I expresed my desire She replied "You're a bit too old, Romeo" by Robert Gorelick Tell her when you see her your not too old That the fire in your soul never goes cold And you don’t need potion For showing emotion As your passion is remotely controlled by Belle Bellevue 2/7/23 Added-ON 2/6/23

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Anselmo Boles

Date: 2/7/2023 10:21:00 PM

Hahaha, what a blast. You 2, are the two most precious items offered in a gourmet menu; and not to-go! Bravo! Cheerio...anselmo

Robert Gorelick
Date: 2/9/2023 7:07:00 PM

Absolutely two peas fin a Valentines pod!

Michael Tor

Date: 2/6/2023 7:49:00 PM

Now if you can market that Potion you can revive marriages and put a smile on everyone's face. Your only as old as you feel they say. The comical side of you is alive and young and well, lol...rt4

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 2/6/2023 6:40:00 PM

Tell her when you see her your not too old - That the fire in your soul never goes cold - And you don’t need potion - For showing emotion - As your passion is remotely controlled.

Robert Gorelick
Date: 2/9/2023 7:05:00 PM

Always pleased to have my Limericks skillfully and cleverly augmented.

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 2/8/2023 1:49:00 PM

Thanks for the add-on Robert… Belle