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Unrequited Love's Last Chance

Ambiguity undefined Overuled and underlined by Blood red hair that hides the ship that sunk in sea blue eyes empty life and bursting heart betrayed by senses in the dark haunted by the righteous wrong a strangled heart's silent song

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 1/28/2016 11:30:00 AM
FREYJA, A great pleasure to find and read your poem today. Love ** SKAT **
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Date: 12/3/2009 12:32:00 PM
Many congrats on your piece being featured t his week. Rgds Janette
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Date: 12/1/2009 4:21:00 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poem being featured this week Freyja. May you have many more. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/30/2009 11:36:00 AM
Many congratulations on your poem being featured >> James
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Date: 11/30/2009 9:10:00 AM
Excellent poem Freyja. Congratulations on your feature this week. Sincerely, Moses
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Date: 11/30/2009 5:44:00 AM
Excellente write. Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. A. W. www.freewebs.com/abcedit
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Date: 7/20/2009 1:23:00 PM
Nice write Freyja, a warm welcome to the Soup>>James
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Date: 7/19/2009 9:48:00 AM
Freyja, wonderful poem. Welcome to PoetrySoup and may we see many more poems written by you here. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/17/2009 3:11:00 PM
Nice poem
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Date: 7/17/2009 3:43:00 AM
Very good Couplet describing pain of love broken. Sara
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Date: 7/17/2009 3:43:00 AM
this is really good! keep on writing!
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