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Power is dynamite Power is unleased Unleased for evil Unleased for good Good brings joy Good brings love Love is of God Love releases Releases happiness Releases freedom Freedom to live Freedom to be responsible Responsible in relationship Responsible in life Life opens doors Life for living Living is a joy Living each moment Moment slowly make minutes Moment do make hours Hours to use gifts Hours to understand Understand oneself Understand others Others are important Others make secure Secure in life Secure in all All aspects All that's worthy Worthy ideas Worthy duty Duty of motherhood Duty of home Home is where the hearth warms Home fills the heart Heart filled with good Heart filled with sympathy Sympathy for situations Sympathy for one's position Position of underling Position of powerlessness Powerlessness at home Powerlessness in business Business of the world Business of management Management unrequited Management of strength Strength Unrequited

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Date: 2/22/2024 10:31:00 AM
A poem that needed to see the light of day. Thanks for bring it to light Sara and for making it your task and not falling short. Not easy to keep the flow right in a poem of this length. You have the power of concentration which not many now possess. Regards David in NZ
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/22/2024 2:19:00 PM
Thank you, David from New Zealand. I appreciate the visit and taking time to comment. Sara K
Date: 2/19/2024 10:46:00 AM
Dear Sara, this poem resonates with a sense of depth and thoughtfulness. I am truly moved by the profound and meaningful impact it holds. It is undeniably powerful and many lines within it stood out to me, particularly the portrayal of both powerlessness and the immense strength of love. Your brilliance continues to shine through in your writing.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/19/2024 12:05:00 PM
Thank you, Lasaad. Your visit adds a special touch. Sara K
Date: 2/18/2024 3:43:00 PM
a nicely arranged and powerful Blitz, Sara K. I admire your ability to write a Blitz...my mind just doesn't function that way. There's depth and meaning to your poem despite the 'blitz.' Well done...enjoy your evening, Sara
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/19/2024 6:42:00 AM
Sara B, you have to just let go and let your mind wander. Thank you for reading and taking time to comment. Sara K
Date: 2/18/2024 1:05:00 PM
I love the shape this blitz created and how deeply profound and meaningful it is! Powerful really! So many lines stood out for me the powerlessness and the power of also love so well depicted and delivered! Brilliant as always dear sara. Pleasure reading your work. Sending you light always
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/19/2024 6:39:00 AM
I appreciate the high praise, IE. It is hard to believe how in this day and age we still have situations where a person is powerless and another person who has all the power and control. It puts a person in a terrible position and possibly puts two people in a terrible position. Sara K
Date: 2/18/2024 12:35:00 PM
I see you are carrying on with the blitz.. this one is nicely done.. nice arrangement of words and flow..
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/19/2024 6:33:00 AM
Thank you, SO. I needed to write and I started with something then it flowed. Thanks for the kind review. Sara K
Date: 2/18/2024 10:12:00 AM
Nice thoughts, thank you for sharing :)
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/18/2024 10:30:00 AM
Why, thank you, Edward. The smile is so nice. Sara K
Date: 2/18/2024 9:47:00 AM
Not my favorite form of poetry, but you did it so well. Best for a win.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/18/2024 10:29:00 AM
Oh, it is not for a contest, Victor. I just wrote it. It did not go the way I wanted it to go but there it is. LOL..Thanks for stopping by ...Sara K

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