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UNPOEM When she sat by me That day on the crowded bus There were vibrations Vibrations and the sweet scent Love imbibes the air To undulate like nothing before Now years later – When I think about it – This mental iridescence altered awareness The shut-out was instantaneous An outward veil transparent With vibrations deeper than moment magic or eyes can invent Oh the shut-out! When there is only her Only me in touch And the moment Moment of ecstasy No word-loaded poem can describe If poem there be It is a finally erased line Dave Austin

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Date: 6/3/2016 1:16:00 PM
Maybe you were lucky during what might seem an unlucky event? "Well! I've often seen a cat without a grin; but a grin without a cat! It's the most curious thing I ever say in my life! -Alice". We could ask Alice, she might find the answer in tea-leaves .:) Love you Daver! Mikki
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Date: 3/20/2016 3:33:00 PM
This would go well with my Sky Train Girl Poem. I enjoyed this piece.
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Date: 3/21/2016 11:13:00 AM
I'll look up Sky Train Girl. Thanks for the read. Love, daver
Date: 3/20/2016 1:34:00 PM
I love this, Daver. Some people just do this to us. And then poof, they are gone.
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Date: 3/20/2016 5:37:00 AM
Smitten...one never forgets. I love the way you ended this Daver. ; )
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Date: 3/20/2016 11:29:00 AM
I felt spring this morning - a tiny, tiny bud on a skinny branch. Thanks for the visit. Love, daver
Date: 3/19/2016 1:03:00 PM
Dear Daver Nice piece on young love, inspirational written and awesomely clever enjoyed the read today glad I decided to stop by your site, take care and I'm looking forward to reading more of your poetry in the future, cheri
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Date: 3/20/2016 11:42:00 AM
Bet you're as pretty as your picture. Good poet too. Thanks for reading my stuff, Love, Old daver

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