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Unlucky For Some Heart's Possessed With War and Hate Blind

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Today I look at a world filled with so much wickedness
written in thirteen syllables count

Highlighted by black Friday unlucky number for some history
when reading about this war seeing pictures of innocent people burned
by chemical weapons used we know by the main polluter of this planet
Filled with evil will destroying land that is now completely poisoned
wildlife or nothing can live in these zones Gulf war syndrome

33 per cent of soldiers have been poisoned

godless entities to do such an act of violence driven by elite bodies
dawning eyes rape and killings on a daily scale spiralling
the sun is rising over our earth watching mans uncaring attitude
we need to wash our feet of this darkness that purges our planet

Separating the wheat from chaff magic prisoner From the dust of darkness you are born from ash remains having walked a crooked pathway inside regrets buried under sparkling silver lining clouds lights up Lightening strikes hitting earthy notes trembling voices falling thunder echoes from dying embers of pain a star spangled vision igniting flames, peaces torch I can feel it in your eyes as oceans mist over Salted inside a triangle of lie holds apex from the hidden truth centre eye exposed one corner Three you are where hidden facts remain tortured hotly our souls know where the fifty shades of grey shape shadows nothing comes under smoke is ever white underneath

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Charlie Smith

Date: 1/15/2017 9:08:00 AM

Good work, great notes...

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 1/14/2017 6:39:00 PM

Hi Liam!:))Wow! Wow!This is a very powerful, outstanding poem you've written here my dearest friend Liam.All so beautifully penned with truth n' caring.Yes,very sadly the world we live in these days is completely in chaos, Liam.All the very sad, terrible events, injustices everywhere, make my heart n' soul very sad.Prayers are very powerful, we need pray more for all Liam.The Bible is very clear about all these n' more in the future.Another very beautiful sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen.Excellent piece!Awesome!A true glowing gem!Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7+++ ++!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray alot you're okay in everything.Please keep positive n' very strong.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers,Liam.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely day!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^