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Forgive me god for I have sin
I kissed a man that isn't him
And when my mouth recieved his tongue
My heart yelled out that this is wrong
My mind reacted with my hands
to push away this man of sand;
sand he was for he left me heavy
and my breathing became unsteady
I try to push, but I was drowned
By his nonsence words and pleasuring sounds
his eyes were pleading to let him reside
and let him place his weakness inside
But I sneered at him I have a love
and pleaded him don't make me shove
I'm sorry that I passed your kiss
So you could think I won't resist
But my act was done to get rid of the thought
of how it would've been, if you left me unlocked...

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  1. Date: 8/11/2010 9:29:00 AM
    What wonderful poetry I am reading today and so diverse. I have not read a bad poem yet today. I am enjoying reading each and everyone from old poets and new poets alike. Lots of amazing contest entries also. Thank you for sharing yours with us today Jessica. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/10/2010 8:10:00 PM
    deep write,, enjoyed this one..P.D.

  1. Date: 8/10/2010 4:22:00 PM
    So luv this piece Jessica.. great emotion in every line and wonderful rhyme as well.. most creative and enjoyable read . we all relate ..we all have been tempted.. with luv..

  1. Date: 8/10/2010 3:57:00 PM
    Interesting thoughts.. that would be a bad situation to find oneself...Glad that it is just a write..Sara