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Unlock the Mystery

You say that you love me I must be to darn blind to see Why I am so sad and lonely? Come and end my misery Love is such a mystery My tears match the deep sea I want to be filled with glee But you said that you love me Why do I feel utter misery? Baby hear my earnest plea Come and unlock the mystery 08-13-16

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Vladislav Raven

Date: 8/15/2016 8:49:00 AM

Hi Alexis, your thoughts on the most beautiful of all mysteries is such a gentl piece of poetry. Your emotions singing from the song of your heart. Another song that sings into the readers heart and stirs such deep emotions. This has to be a seven Alexis. Hugs....Mike. XX

Bl Devnath

Date: 8/14/2016 11:43:00 AM

Really a nice poem of love feeling, my friend. Hugs, Cloudy poet, bl

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/14/2016 10:42:00 AM

I really enjoyed this one, Alexis. Very much!

Lynn Marie

Date: 8/14/2016 7:00:00 AM

A very expressive piece that feels "lyrical" to me, as if to "sing" is to release these powerful emotions. Great writing. blessings, lynn p.s. my first ;Monorhyme", a favourite :-)

Eileen Manassian

Date: 8/14/2016 5:27:00 AM

Deep pain.....words must be coupled up with action. Your write reveals this well. Hugs, dear one