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Unleash the Passion

Unleash the passion within my soul the grace of my Savior is my pardon my prayer to You, Lord, make me whole unleash the passion within my soul help me lose myself to give You control and dance with You in your garden unleash the passion within my soul the grace of my Savior is my pardon Unleash the love within my soul in You, I am a new creation Your love alone has made me whole unleash the love within my soul the sin of this world has taken its toll my heart cries for your salvation unleash the love within my soul in You, I am a new creation for Unleash contest (Paula Swanson) third place "But you are not controlled by your sinful nature. You are controlled by the Spirit if you have the Spirit of God living in you." - Romans 8:9

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Date: 2/29/2012 6:07:00 AM
congratulations!
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Date: 2/28/2012 9:01:00 AM
congrats Rhonda on a brilliant win luv for this marvelous write ..
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Date: 2/28/2012 5:28:00 AM
Congratulations on your super placement in Paula's "Unleashed" contest Rhonda. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/27/2012 11:32:00 PM
A really great entry. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 2/25/2012 5:30:00 PM
Create in me a clean heart oh God and renew a right spirit within me...I love how you inserted....unleash the love within my soul Super write Rhonda :) I'm sure you have touched His heart with your cry Jon
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 2/25/2012 8:20:00 PM
Thank you Jon!
Date: 2/20/2012 11:21:00 AM
Beautiful! If everyone unleashed the love they have maybe our world would be a better place. God Bless and good luck!
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 2/21/2012 1:34:00 PM
Thank you, Amanda! You are so right. Blessings, Rhonda :)
Date: 2/19/2012 10:10:00 AM
That's lovely prayer poem,nice in form.Thanks for sharing it.God bless you. Hugs!Erich
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 2/19/2012 3:18:00 PM
Thank you, Erich! I always appreciate your comments. Blessings, Rhonda
Date: 2/19/2012 7:50:00 AM
Rhonda your poem for Paula's contest is outstanding. You captured the essence of unleash well. Thanks for all your comments and support
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 2/19/2012 3:17:00 PM
Thank you, BB! I appreciate your comments. I enjoy reading your work...looking forward to reading more. Blessings, Rhonda
Date: 2/18/2012 10:32:00 PM
hey, how interesting. My unleashed poem is a triolet too!! (not like yours of course, but it's cool we chose the same form for it). Good luck, but you won't need it. THis is sure to do well.
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 2/19/2012 3:15:00 PM
*learned
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 2/18/2012 10:45:00 PM
I love writing triolets, but I have learner a lot from reading yours. They only work when the repeated lines are strong. Thanks for your encouragement. Rhonda :)
Date: 2/18/2012 2:48:00 PM
Wonderful. I hope she appreciates it as much as do I. Thank you Rhonda for your appreciated comments on my poetry. Loe, Joyce
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 2/18/2012 10:42:00 PM
Thank you, Joyce. This was a poem I needed to write today win or lose. I appreciate your kind words. Blessings. Rhonda
Date: 2/18/2012 10:47:00 AM
Very good approach to the contest theme.Enjoyed the read Rhonda.Best wishes.
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 2/18/2012 8:14:00 PM
Thanks, Kash!!
Date: 2/18/2012 10:13:00 AM
This is beautiful, Rhonda. Best wishes in the contest. Love, Kim
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 2/18/2012 8:14:00 PM
Thanks, Kim!!

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