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Unknown Hand

My voice eat by my heart's deafening beat No matter how I tried to catch my breath. Why I couldn't reach for it? Every time I'll try, still in the end I burst into cry... Why i have this kind of life? A faint sound then i hear... someone is calling me out there Lending His hand to show me where. My confused mind starts to think Who is this man or is he a King? Slowly i walked in my trembling knees, Crossed-palm i walk through the street. Finding answers to my curiosity Who is behind the hand so good to me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 11/28/2012 10:08:00 AM
Evangeline excellent...David
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Date: 11/28/2012 10:26:00 PM
thank u dave :-)

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