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She was described as the ocean As like the ocean not much of her was discovered Seeing a stranger not letting them know anything about you You not knowing anything about them Even the closest ones to you have not opened up your doors completely Trust is a hard thing to gain; but a very easy thing to lose Scared to open the doors with being scared for past experiences to occur once again People letting you down over and over.... try after try Known from the outside Unknown from within

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 7/28/2015 8:35:00 PM
Erika, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 7/28/2015 12:44:00 AM
An internal dialogue really well described. My wife used to say that if 99 dogs have bitten you, you still have to give the 100th a chance. I can empathise with this one. Kind regards Ian
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Date: 7/27/2015 10:50:00 PM
A deep write, Erika, and a great first submission to the site. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I hope that you enjoy your stay with us like-minded wordsmiths, have fun. Viv x
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Date: 7/27/2015 10:11:00 PM
I liked your poem. It is really difficult to really get to know someone on the inside.
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Date: 7/27/2015 9:54:00 PM
Erika, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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