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Below is the poem entitled Unknown which was written by poet amanda smith. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Im drowning in a pool of tears
thinking about the last years

In a moment all things lost
was it really worth the cost

What will my future hold
only time knows what will unfold

Until then I'll sit and wait
for the day of my unkown fate

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  1. Date: 2/14/2013 11:12:00 AM
    Amanda better to wait than wish your life away....David

  1. Date: 2/14/2013 9:21:00 AM
    I like the darkness of this one...

  1. Date: 2/14/2013 7:37:00 AM

  1. Date: 4/26/2012 1:17:00 PM
    Welcome to the soup, Amanda! Time wait for no one, we have to have fate in all the things we do in our lives! Great reading though! oxoxo Laila

  1. Date: 4/26/2012 3:10:00 AM
    This is beautifully written..and one day it will come..stay positive!! We go through trials to make us stronger!!

  1. Date: 4/25/2012 9:34:00 PM
    This sounds so sad, or maybe just waiting to see what will happen. Sometimes you have to make it happen. Don't just wait for time.