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Universe Unwinding

Universe Unwinding Wonder beyond Glide through clouds of doubt Take to the clear rising at the edge Evident as the light of day takes you down Explode there Merge first…. yellow gold red beams with blue Fold on the mighty winds of distant lost commands Cosmic tumbles to where the universe might go Draw away from temptations false steps in space To all Moons and suns seen There, the hole to the void looks through Looks back at you 2 Mirrors face to face shine on themselves In reflective endlessness in the dark Making “nothing” no more or less their home Avoid them if they shatter Take flight on matter Up front to the ever outward ends of time Energy showers on in distant fractured lights Becoming once again no more

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 4/30/2014 10:33:00 AM
Congratulations. nice win.....SKAT
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Earl Schumacker
Date: 4/30/2014 11:04:00 AM
Hi SKAT! Thank you so much for recognizing my little poem. Earl
Date: 4/26/2014 5:07:00 AM
Congrats on the win and thanks for sharing this colorful poem,Earl
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Date: 4/26/2014 6:09:00 AM
Thanks Dr. Mehta. It's always great to hear from you. Best Regards, Earl
Date: 4/26/2014 1:33:00 AM
nice seeing you on this winning list... XOX...PD
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Date: 4/26/2014 6:13:00 AM
Thanks PD. I sincerely appreciate hearing from you. Earl
Date: 4/25/2014 11:55:00 PM
Very beautiful write, could feel imagery of every word in this one, congrats Earl on great win !
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Date: 4/26/2014 6:18:00 AM
Good morning Dr. Sharma. I think of my poems as my children who take on lives of their own. Some of them are good....others need a little shaping. I'm glade you enjoyed this one. I am deeply appreciative of your kind words. Thank you very much. Regards, Earl
Date: 4/25/2014 8:37:00 PM
a cool title for this one that makes you feel the universe unwinding!! congrats on your win.
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Date: 4/25/2014 8:43:00 PM
Thank you so much Andrea. I appreciate your comments. Regards, Earl
Date: 4/25/2014 5:42:00 PM
really a very good piece here, placed just outside of 3rd, I would've liked to see a little more colour and 'two' instead of '2'! I know, I'm picky lol nevertheless, the sort of modernistic poetry I like to read, very interesting and profound, love that bit of rhyme thrown in there "avoid them if they shatter/take flight on matter" - congrats on your win in my contest :)
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Earl Schumacker
Date: 4/25/2014 8:48:00 PM
Hi Charlotte, Thank you for your consideration of my poem. I'm glade that you enjoyed it and deeply appreciate your honest comments. Regards, Earl
Date: 4/25/2014 5:34:00 PM
Beautiful Earl and congratulations on winning in Charlotte's contest. Verlena
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Date: 4/25/2014 8:50:00 PM
Hi Verlena, Thank you for your kind words. Regards, Earl
Date: 4/16/2014 6:28:00 AM
- Soft and beautifully written, Earl!! - Happy Easter! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/16/2014 8:54:00 AM
I deeply appreciate your response Anne-Lise. Thank you so much. Earl
Date: 4/15/2014 4:18:00 PM
hello earl this really carried me outward and gave me the sense of the great beyond. Nice to meet you and happy to be the first to comment on this worthy poem. SuZ
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Earl Schumacker
Date: 4/15/2014 7:13:00 PM
Thank you so much for your kind comments on the seashore poem and this item. I'm glade you enjoyed them. Regards, Earl

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