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Universe

Universe is a place of mystery. It has thousands of stars, Millions of planets Who knows what secret they have. Who knows where it ends. It is always there. All stars, Forming a nebula and becoming black holes As comets zip by and crash On planets. One planet with ten moons and the other one with none. One galaxy with lots of stars

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/7/2015 11:33:00 PM

Hi Sahil, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Skat A

Date: 6/6/2015 10:42:00 PM

Sahil, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT