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Soft Thud, concrete shakes, yet tower solid--but dread, water always wins. 3/28/16 For contest: "In one line (monoku # 10) write what you SEE or FEEL" Sponsor: Poet Destroyer A

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Date: 4/2/2016 3:19:00 PM
cool title for an ominous one liner. Congrats
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Tom Quigley
Date: 4/5/2016 5:47:00 PM
Thanks! Pretty ominous picture...
Date: 4/1/2016 9:32:00 PM
Great verse,Tom, congratulations on your win :-)
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Tom Quigley
Date: 4/1/2016 11:41:00 PM
Thanks, Eve!
Date: 4/1/2016 8:05:00 AM
Excellent & Congrats !!!
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Tom Quigley
Date: 4/1/2016 11:41:00 PM
Thanks, Lenny!
Date: 4/1/2016 8:00:00 AM
When you write Tom, I really feel your overflowing passion in writing! You inspire so many people with your works and I'm so lucky I'm one of them! Thank you so much! Congratulations! :) _HANS
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Tom Quigley
Date: 4/1/2016 11:41:00 PM
Thanks, Hans! I get the same from a bunch of folks here!
Date: 4/1/2016 1:58:00 AM
Congrats on ur superb win with this lovely write Tom..
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Tom Quigley
Date: 4/1/2016 6:20:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 3/31/2016 3:53:00 PM
Congrats my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
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Tom Quigley
Date: 3/31/2016 9:11:00 PM
Thanks BL!
Date: 3/31/2016 10:03:00 AM
Congrats on your win Tom
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Tom Quigley
Date: 3/31/2016 1:29:00 PM
Thanks, Joseph!
Date: 3/31/2016 6:41:00 AM
I sense a feeling of uneasiness...nature is hard to subdue, even if some of man's projects appear to be indestructible! Congratulations on this deserved win, Tom! // paul
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Tom Quigley
Date: 3/31/2016 1:30:00 PM
Thanks, Paul! Yep, that was it. :-)
Date: 3/31/2016 12:27:00 AM
Hi TOM, Congratulations on your Awesome Win. Stop by my blog "Invading," if you'd like. Drop a smile and tell me a little about your Monoku :) Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Tom Quigley
Date: 3/31/2016 6:21:00 AM
Thanks, Linda!
Date: 3/29/2016 9:30:00 PM
... and the cost of plumbing (yikes!) ... cool how you took us inside the lighthouse. Very interesting.
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Tom Quigley
Date: 3/30/2016 8:36:00 AM
Thanks!
Date: 3/29/2016 3:38:00 PM
awesome title for water> I had it in a losing battle for my own entry. It's so fun to read people's interpretations.
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Tom Quigley
Date: 3/30/2016 8:36:00 AM
Thanks, Andrea!
Date: 3/29/2016 11:02:00 AM
Nice. I've just got to try this form after reading this.
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Tom Quigley
Date: 3/29/2016 11:11:00 AM
It was my first go at Monoku. Done some Haiku before...

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