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United

nature is nature you are you as I am I united as one

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008


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Adell Foster
Date: 10/1/2008 5:57:00 PM
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Hello Michael, I hope that you are feeling better my friend. This is a wonderful expression of unity, proving that two individuals may differ yet united they stand as one and the same. Thank you for sharing such a fine read. God's Love and Many Blessings to you and yours, Always, Adell
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Date: 10/1/2008 9:06:00 AM
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Amen! Short and to the point. Your world view sure sounds peaceful. Thank you so much for your suggestion regarding "Bits of Life". You are so right and I made the change if you want to see it. Thank you also for your excitement regarding "Tidbits". Keep on writing! Karen
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Deneen White
Date: 9/30/2008 3:49:00 PM
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we should all be untied the world would be a much better place, life is too short not to, time passes by so quickly, nice write, take care D-nyce
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Brian Strand
Date: 9/28/2008 11:45:00 PM
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Line 3 brings this together well Michael.rgds Brian.Thanks for your comments.(yes the reference is to Ephesians.)
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George Anos
Date: 9/28/2008 9:48:00 PM
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The great circle of life begins with ONE.
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James Foulk
Date: 9/28/2008 8:27:00 PM
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such a beautiful and warm poem.
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Carrie Richards
Date: 9/28/2008 6:13:00 PM
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Especially when we care...we are united! Very moving poem...~Take care, my good neighbor.---Carrie
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Sharon Winter
Date: 9/28/2008 5:31:00 AM
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Yes, different but the same. Well said Michael. Love, Shar
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