Unicorn

Fly Greek protector of the forest. These great and powerful creatures will roam. Step softly on the grass, no noise was heard. A unicorn appears when all else fails!

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Jack Horne

Date: 6/21/2011 1:03:00 PM

Crikey, I didn't realise how many contest results I'd missed while co judging with Carolyn - please forgive hasty message - many congrats to you for all your recent wins : )

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/21/2011 10:11:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Chris's "Double The Fun" contest Cory. Love, Carol

M. Alpestris

Date: 6/20/2011 7:36:00 AM

Cool entry to the contest...congratulations to you!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/19/2011 3:41:00 PM

My congratulations on the win in the contest of chris, cory

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 6/19/2011 9:34:00 AM

This one made me smile, Cory-- really enjoyed how you made your tetractys about the beautiful unicorn! Super congrats on your win :D

Wilma Neels

Date: 6/19/2011 4:20:00 AM

Stunning piece Cory, congratulations on your win in Chris' contest :)

Kash Poet

Date: 6/19/2011 1:12:00 AM

Lovely poem...congrats Cory on your win.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/18/2011 10:18:00 PM

Cory, I adore unicorn poems. Thanks for coming up with this one for us all to see. It's awesome! Congratulations in Chris' contest.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/18/2011 10:04:00 PM

raving KUDOS to you for the special win, cory :) huggs

Francine Roberts

Date: 6/18/2011 9:36:00 PM

love it, congrats on your win in Chris's contest Cory

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/16/2011 9:08:00 PM

just luv unicorns too cory.. great imagery my friend.. feeling the wings fly past me with your words my friend..luv..

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/16/2011 5:21:00 PM

ooooo! favorite,,, favorite,,,, love..it... and my room is full of unicorns,,,,, I'm a unicorn freak..lol...

Dinda Minardi

Date: 6/16/2011 7:31:00 AM

It was fun to read your poem :)

Matthew Anish

Date: 6/16/2011 6:53:00 AM

Greatly imaginative poem! Peace and Blessings Matthew Anish

Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 6/15/2011 7:11:00 PM

And even when all else fails, Never...I mean NEVER...Play Leapfrog with a UNICORN! It can be a real pain in the butt!-----Serious though, Peaceful Poetry brother and thank you for your support!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/15/2011 5:42:00 PM

Nice observation and informative piece on unicorn, cory

Roxanna Johnson

Date: 6/15/2011 5:32:00 PM

I love unicorns so I enjoyed this <3

James Foulk

Date: 6/15/2011 2:31:00 PM

a great piece of fine poetry.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/15/2011 1:36:00 PM

Awesome, Cory. Love the mythological tie in this write. Long ago I posted a poem by the same name. You'll do very well in the contest with this entry. Love, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/15/2011 1:22:00 PM

Excellent magic..Good luck in the contest...Reads like a winner..Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/15/2011 12:31:00 PM

We have so many amazing writers here at PoetrySoup and I enjoy reading all the poems. I am happy your poetry was among the poems I was able to read today Cory. Please continue to write and share your poetry with the world. Love, Carol

Zzzzz Zzzzz

Date: 6/15/2011 12:07:00 PM

A fine write, with a mystical feel to it.

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 6/15/2011 12:04:00 PM

I love unicorns, they are magical creatures and your poems is perfectly written as a Tetractys. However, I need to say that unicorns are not Chinese of origin, but Greek. Their nature does evoke purity and the pursuit of safeguard purity. On your last line of the first stanza, it feels like something is missing. I do like your second stanza. Best of luck in the contest. Thank you also for your kind comments on my poems. Best wishes, Caroline.