Unfulfilled

Desires unfulfilled affection gone astray needs ignored and imagination plays in bed alone emotions groan mind begins to roam LOVE soon leaves home Lay

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/11/2011 7:53:00 AM

good morning! Lay,,., how are you? And yes this time I missed you and alot of other poets. I sure missed your poetry as well, glad to have stopped by take care,..p.d.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/13/2011 10:21:00 AM

Lay, I saw your contest and would love to write for it, but I wasn't able to have children. I'm sure you'll get some find entries though. So many poets here write wonderful poems about their children. Love, Carolyn

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/12/2011 3:56:00 PM

Lay, this is the way breakups begin. Ignoring needs and turning off the affection will lead anyone astray. Sad but poignant poem. Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/12/2011 3:24:00 PM

emotionally charged write Lay.. feeling the unfulfilled desires u expressed luv.. sensitive and touching ...luv..