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Unfortunate Souls

They're unexpected and comes as it please leaving young or old crying at there knees it wasn't caused it was no ones fault opening and closing like a big iron bolt it stalks out it victims then goes for the kill opening and closing the uncontrollable seal it takes its victim at any age the young old or even middle stage it seems so innocent but yet so violent killing any innocent that it resents mother nature so sweet but so mean when people struggle to keep it clean you wonder why this beast attacks to make it worse you fire back opening its mouth and piling rubbish in no wonder it lives a life of sin no point in retaliating we know who is going to win we use the world as a great big bin wave of anger crash ashore leaving helpless people screaming please no more it shakes the ground gently before moving into the kill no one can stop not the government or even the old bill it moves faster the lightening or light itself an act so violent it could kill herself so tremendous yet so fragile can be so sweet and yet so vile

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 9/24/2011 10:14:00 AM
Congrats Crystal on your featured write. Vince
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Date: 9/21/2011 3:27:00 PM
Congrats Crystal on featured poem this week on PS... nice one to share my friend...luv..
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Date: 9/21/2011 8:25:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week Crystal. Love, Carol
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Book: Shattered Sighs