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Unforgiven

He grew up in a family so big he wasn't even seen. He was the youngest of seven, and all he had to wear Was his brothers hand me downs. No he didn't get much attention, And oh I forgot to mention.. His daddy was never around. He was the unforgiving. His daddy always worked, And was always drunk For as long as he could remember. They even stayed up late one night, And shared a couple of beers. He remebers his dad Walking in his room, And kissing him good night. It's the only time he said "I love you' He was the unforgivin'. No, he never played ball with his son, And never took him fishin'. All of this was just wishful thinkin'. He was the unforgivin'. His son's grown up now With three daughters of his own, But he wasn't the best father They would know. All he can remember is walking in their room Kissing them good night, And saying "I love you". He is the unforgivin'. 12/12/2002

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Date: 3/17/2016 9:03:00 AM
Greetings Alfredo. Welcome to Poetry Soup, and congrats for having your piece featured in the Poetry Soup homepage!!! ;-)
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Date: 3/14/2016 12:54:00 PM
- Thank you for your first poem, Alfredo :) - I welcome you to Poetry Soup :) - Hope you will find our "soup" friendly and fun - Good luck :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/12/2016 9:38:00 PM
Alfredo, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 3/11/2016 11:31:00 AM
Deep write, Alfredo, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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