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Unforgiveable

I say, let me forgive you Unlock me, unchain me Set me free at last, from you, from this prison of resentment Set me free I want to forgive you, I need to forgive you I must forgive you, so that I can move on, be free, be alive But, you won't let me forgive you for if I do, I might forget you You say, that would be unforgiveable

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Eileen Manassian

Date: 8/10/2014 12:43:00 AM

This is so deep, Dave. Yes...to be forgiven means to be forgotten. Reminds me of a poem I've written entitled, Hate Me. Wow. Loved this piece. Very well worded.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/10/2014 1:00:00 AM

Awwwww....thanks, David. You are kind. Glad you liked it. :)

David Brown
Date: 8/10/2014 12:58:00 AM

I see what you mean...your's is almost the opposite side of the 'conversation'. Beautiful work as always, Eileen.

David Brown
Date: 8/10/2014 12:53:00 AM

Thank you as always Eileen for your wonderful feedback. I must go and read your poem now, you have piqued my interest! ...David