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Unexplainable

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Below is the poem entitled Unexplainable which was written by poet Cecil Sydney Hurt. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Unexplainable

If dependence was darkness
And reason was feel
Then touch would be euphoric 
With hearts made from steel 

Closeness was sorrow 
As time is defence 
Microns of seconds 
As chimes is  last a lifetime

Defenceless as I utter the 
words 
Speechless as I receive them 
Kindness of a grape 
Memory's never upset the 
blood pumper

You've no reason to pay me 
back
I owe you zilch and u owe me 
jack
We will be six foot under one 
day 
Even then we will be 3 feet 
apart

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  1. Date: 11/12/2012 3:06:00 PM
    this is very well done, your timing is perfect. the only thing i have to say other wise is to maybe rethink the last word of stanza two. it just seems a bit off. but other wise you have a hit

  1. Date: 10/17/2012 2:13:00 PM
    Hi Cecil I like this, welcome. :-)

    Hurt Avatar Cecil Sydney Hurt
    Date: 10/17/2012 5:20:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Many thanks
  1. Date: 10/17/2012 8:25:00 AM
    That ending hit hard. Very well done!

    Hurt Avatar Cecil Sydney Hurt
    Date: 10/17/2012 5:20:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Many thanks sir
  1. Date: 10/17/2012 7:06:00 AM
    Hi Cecil and welcome to the soup I like this and hope to read more from you in the future, all the best Owen

    Hurt Avatar Cecil Sydney Hurt
    Date: 10/17/2012 5:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you owen