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Unexplainable

As the Wind blows my hair, I realized that LOVE is somehow unfair. while sitting in the Balcony, I can hear a different symphony.. They say love is Blind, maybe it's true,cause true Love is Hard to find. Some say love is Everywhere. so maybe Mr.Right is just somewhere.. The love we feel is so hard to explain, maybe it's the trust we cant really maintain. The emptiness of one's heart can someone offer him/her a fresh start? i think,love is like a lullaby we hear everyday. and trust is one of it's strongest proof they say. If I'm stranded in an island, two sets of footprints, it's all i want to see in the sand. like in a shell ,feel the carved pain that is in me. Is it just me? or most of us are just too blind to see? while making this poem,i can feel my heart beat, wiping my tears, & wishing our two hands will meet. Until now, no one has the key, The key that my heart wants to see. While i was crying, no one has wiped my tears. is it hard to cast a glance & forget our own fears? someday, somehow, someone can sit w/ me to watch the sunset. & he will be someone whom i LOVE, i bet. I hope someone will like reading this, & value what they shouldn't miss.

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Date: 1/24/2011 12:26:00 PM
hello....srap nmn po pkinggan ng poem mo... I also love poems po... filipino here also...po
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Marianne Nolido
Date: 10/25/2011 8:26:00 AM
salamat po. glad 2 know that u love poems and that ur also filipino :)
Date: 1/14/2011 10:55:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Marianne. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors this year. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information about PoetrySoup. If you don't find what you are looking for ask any poet here. Everyone is willing to help. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/14/2011 4:56:00 AM
Marianne, this a subtle rhyme my friend.the imagery in the poem is also great. keep it up
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