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Unexpected Twist

Silence shutters in through the fresh air streaked windows painted in despair star struck visions seek the light hidden inside the distant night ----------------------------- Smoke-filled eyes blink gasps trying to think a whisper heard no just a bird ------------- so missed a twist sighs why -- -

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Date: 10/17/2016 8:16:00 PM
Wow, a brilliant shape. I want to try a really complex shape but I haven't thought of one yet. I did the tulip under the evergreen but like a really well done guitar with a great poem to match or a piano...just really complex shapes...where the shape is really really well done and the poem even better. Oh well there is no crime in dreaming. A Fav.
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Tim Smith
Date: 10/17/2016 9:03:00 PM
Thank you my friend, I'm just dipping my toes in the water.
Date: 10/14/2016 11:12:00 PM
Already one on a pretty feather, I am impressed!
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Tim Smith
Date: 10/17/2016 9:01:00 PM
Thank you Arthur...lol
Date: 10/14/2016 3:07:00 PM
This is brilliantly constructed Tim I am going to have to try this one day:-) hugs Jan xx
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Tim Smith
Date: 10/14/2016 3:59:00 PM
Thanks Jan...might try something more creative next time
Date: 10/14/2016 1:41:00 PM
Very cool. I like this a lot. This doesn't seem like it would easy to do, but you sure made it look that way.
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Tim Smith
Date: 10/14/2016 3:03:00 PM
Thanks Chris. I was listening to Coldplay and it started to take shape itself so I went with it.
Date: 10/14/2016 1:27:00 PM
Good one. I like that!
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Tim Smith
Date: 10/14/2016 3:01:00 PM
Thanks Heidi

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