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Une Belle Adieu

A strange and powerful thing ---- to not know what shall come, where winds shall carry thee, and time turns many a calendar, withered with wings of days some light, others grey; A Great Lover too far away.... (many venus' between) to not feel their whisper Save through the long-line of cold techno-echoes; A hunger shall not be filled, lay me down with the voracious lion ---- eat my emptiness.... who can feast long and forever; she is gone

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Date: 4/12/2014 9:12:00 PM
Hi Keith, Somewhat sad. Okay, it is sad. I can feel the emptiness. Almost as lonely as the moon. ... CONGRATULATIONS:) on having your poem featured on the soups HOME PAGE. <3 =LINDA
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Keith O.J. Hunt
Date: 4/13/2014 1:16:00 PM
Thanks for your sweet empathy Linda; it was a sad time yes, a time to learn.... Thanks too for the congrats! Been busy lately, I'm going to check out yours and others poetry when I get time. On Monday I'm going to post some of my latest poetry BTW: Love your new pic :-) (blush) have a good Sunday!
Date: 4/7/2014 4:55:00 AM
A brilliant write. Congratulations on your poem being featured this wee, keith
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Keith O.J. Hunt
Date: 4/7/2014 8:39:00 AM
Thanks Doc!
Date: 3/11/2014 9:17:00 PM
Voracious lion -----eat my emptiness..... I feel better already. Thanks for sharring Keith.
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