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Undying Flame

The day you left All I could do is think about you more reminiscing every second we spent together I thought about you more and more As each day passed It all began from the moment we met I’m afraid it’ll never end I thought of you more and more More than the day I last saw you I felt like I lost you What did I lose? something I never had someone that wasn’t mine How could you not be mine? We knew each other for a few days Was it love ? Did I have yours? Did you feel mine? We were filled with desire and lust I couldn’t keep my hands off of you The passion was so great and intense I never want to depart In your arms I was content Heavens I felt with your kiss This passion of ours was short and long both at the same time It wasn’t meant to be Perhaps it is Perhaps it was in our previous life Perhaps you were mine then We now met again in this life With the same ardor and fire Forever burning fire If only it was the right time like it was back then I wouldn’t have been suffering I would rest with delight in your arms That’s just how I feel This is what I bear I don’t know about you In both ways this fire will never burn out Lucky I am to have met you If you never return I hope we do meet again And never depart I leave my mind and heart to wander and reminisce about you and us And let fate play our destiny. poem 1 in "I'm Yours" collection

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Date: 10/26/2018 11:12:00 PM
The experience of love whether painful or blissful is never forgotten. well expressed. Love it
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Unfamiliar Flower
Date: 10/29/2018 5:16:00 AM
thank you :)
Date: 2/14/2018 3:29:00 AM
- A poem with feelings, lovely written Anna :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Unfamiliar Flower
Date: 10/29/2018 5:16:00 AM
thank you :)
Date: 2/11/2018 9:05:00 AM
we all have the chance....for Eternal romance....because Love can never die....not even when it makes us cry....because once the heart has been entered....all vulnerabilities are rendered....i can really relate to this anna....great job....;)
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Eric Boddie
Date: 2/11/2018 9:36:00 AM
i sent you an email....
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Unfamiliar Flower
Date: 2/11/2018 9:20:00 AM
yes i agree with you... thank you
Date: 2/11/2018 8:58:00 AM
You expressed loss very well, a deep and emotive write Anna... Loss is hard, especially when one is still in love..
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Unfamiliar Flower
Date: 2/11/2018 9:19:00 AM
yes true all that one has to do is bear

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