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She felt his presence by her side Her first reaction – unimpressed. She turned her head, a toss of hair, The situation she assessed. Maybe it was the dauntless smile Perhaps the wicked twinkling eyes The self-assurance in his poise... Do warning bells ever suffice? She sipped her drink and options weighed He praised her looks and wispy gown His flavoured words - delicacy Her guard she weakly lowered down. Till late at night beneath the stars They danced to music, hands on hips If ever doubts had crossed her mind Erased they were by burning lips. She found him suave and debonair His face, ethereal, divine Attentive eyes looked deep within His lips still tasted of sweet wine. The music played; he held her tight Each sense alive and needing more She whispered breathlessly to him, "There's more to me you must explore." Behind closed doors, he lay her down And kissed each part that he undressed Before her nakedness was shown Her face he tenderly caressed. "I will not take what is not mine; You will not be a one night stand." "My love," she said with bated breath, You'll guide my life; I'll guide your hand." A Callman Collaboration (Paul Callus and Eileen Manassian)

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Date: 3/10/2020 9:05:00 AM
Enjoyable to read again. Thanks for your visit. Hugs Rick.
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Date: 11/21/2018 8:14:00 AM
A blessed piece full of passion and love, Eileen, Paul and you have done a super collaboration! Masterful penning! Gordon
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Date: 10/23/2018 5:38:00 PM
Hi Eileen, a wonderful collaboration by you and Paul. Such a passionate sensual piece with such strong, clear imagery. The gentle words bring the reader into the heart of the passion. This piece was crafted by two true poets. This is excellent work. well done to the two of you. A fave. Have a wonderful Wednesday. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Date: 9/20/2018 7:16:00 PM
Hello Eiieen, this poem has a lot of passion. Have a nice evening my friend.
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Date: 9/13/2018 8:47:00 PM
Tender and passionate. An enjoyable read. Well done both of you. I’m glad I dropped by to taste this delicacy.
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Date: 9/12/2018 3:09:00 PM
Awesome collab my beautiful friend...well done Paul & Eileen...love & collabs...^WW^
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Date: 9/12/2018 1:16:00 PM
A beautiful write so blessedly penned, a collaboration supremely done both Paul and Eileen. Great stuff!, have a great day, Gordon
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Date: 9/10/2018 2:45:00 PM
A surreal experience, reading this creative poem! I felt as though I was dancing with time, but did not quite know the dance steps! An intriguing write
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Date: 9/9/2018 1:33:00 AM
Wow, you and Paul work together so well, awesome synergy. Well done both! Viv x
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Date: 8/31/2018 8:29:00 PM
Your silky, sexy and seamless collaboration with Paul is sensually scrumptious, Eileen. A fantastic passionate romance that enthralled me from start to finish - especially awesome is that great last line! Luscious poetry! Warmest wishes and hugs always.. ~Susan
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Date: 8/29/2018 1:04:00 PM
Thank you my willing and talented collaborator:) Always a pleasure to mix ink with yours. Hugs // paul
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/31/2018 2:49:00 AM
The pleasure is all mine, dear.....as always. :) Hugs
Date: 8/29/2018 11:53:00 AM
A beautiful interlude...bravo you two
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/31/2018 2:50:00 AM
Thanks, Tim. :) Much appreciated. Hope all is well with you and yours.
Date: 8/28/2018 6:33:00 PM
I always marvel at successful collaborations - this one is awesome.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/31/2018 2:51:00 AM
Thank you, Agnes. Paul and I are comfortable with each other's muses. :) I appreciate the visit.
Date: 8/28/2018 6:05:00 PM
I must say to you too! ~Wonderful sensual pleasing read <3 xomo!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/31/2018 2:51:00 AM
Sensual pleasing is always a wonderful thing, dear. Thanks for the comment and visit. Hugs
Date: 8/28/2018 2:54:00 PM
Wow!!!! This beautiful collaboration took my breath away. The theme, the flow and the rhyming were all just about perfect. Bravo to both poets for the seamless, sensual work you have shared.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/28/2018 2:56:00 PM
Thanks, Chris, for this high praise. I appreciate it. Paul and I have written over ten poems together. I'm hoping one day we could publish a book together....that would be a dream come true for me. :)

Book: Shattered Sighs