Undone

Randolph Riggs was a house cleaner who hungered for Mrs. McGleaner. He made an advance and unbelted his pants. It's been ages since he's seen her.

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Jan Allison

Date: 11/26/2018 4:43:00 AM

ha ha ha this is hilarious Paul, that ending is absolutely priceless! So glad to see you back on soup have missed seeing you, hope you are well:-) Into my faves:-) hugs Jan xx

Jan Allison
Date: 11/26/2018 4:55:00 PM

You are too kind to me Paul! Son is just back from 3 months traveling in Taiwan, South Korea and Japan - he started a new job in London today. I hope we see him at Christmas and can catch up then:-) All good with me and hubby, hope everything is good with you and your family:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Schneiter
Date: 11/26/2018 8:10:00 AM

Thank you, Jan. Your words are always sweet and loving, whether in a comment or in your incredible poetry. You are my heroine. I hope you and your loved ones are well, and that life is being kind to you. Hugs, Always, Paul