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Undetermined

Captive by the thought of death, I feel I have nothing left. She hides away her truthful fears, all she has left is many tears. Her world is starting to fall apart, She is feeling the pain in her heart. She can't unravel the solution to her doubt, help is what she needs, a lonely girl on her own, day after day she pleads. Her actions are misunderstood, sadness deep within, the battle she is fighting, she knows that she can't win. Pondering the mystery of what lies beyong the grave, wanting to give up, because she knows she can't be saved. Cause of death... Undetermined. COLLEEN MARIE BONO February 25, 2012

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Date: 5/30/2013 9:46:00 PM
Hi Colleen, wow... over the reason of death.... Congratulations with your awesome winning free verse poem... xox~ LINDA
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Date: 5/28/2013 6:49:00 PM
congrats on your amazing win. take care cory
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Date: 5/28/2013 6:38:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserve win. Connie
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Date: 5/28/2013 6:20:00 PM
Very sad poem, but written very well. Congrats! Thanks for submitting to my contest. Kim
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Date: 2/25/2012 4:46:00 PM
God bless... sad poem, Colleen
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