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Undeserving

Bringing the bad attitude will earn you no tips Giving service with a frown and pouty lips Coming to the job with personal problems vexing your mind Flipping the bird to the kids ... cloudy is your sunshine Mixing the orders all up has the customers grumbling Swishing your butt like a ****, as you walk away mumbling under your breath Feeling like you're a victim, whose not being compensated right Being up on your feet working all day, those table tips are just way too light You deserve better you feel, a much better lot in life than what you got So you come my way with a negative vibe, percolating frustration like a coffee pot Your foul demeanor left my meal with a sour taste, lost my appetite looking at your unhappy face Now you expect a tip from me, undeservedly No how, no ma'am ... no way But you did make me leave with a big smile, when I saw you drop that food tray Then you having to clean up that mess was karma served, which really made my day

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 1/16/2017 2:28:00 PM
very descriptive and potent, freddie... enjoyed the wordplay and theme... huggs
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Date: 1/16/2017 10:44:00 AM
Exactly, I'm sure it wasn't your fault the position she was in in life. If you are going to do a job, do it the best you can, then maybe someday you will get ahead. No tips for rude people. Well done my friend.
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